Date: Thu Mar 7 18:54:09 CET 2002
User: Dan Kalowsky
Directory: srmdoc/admin
Log Message:
[1.20]
- A few more grammatical corrections
Modified files:
srmdoc/admin/compiling.xml (version: 1.4)
srmdoc/admin/installation.xml (version: 1.7)
[FILE: /srmdoc/admin/compiling.xml]
--- srmdoc/admin/compiling.xml:1.3 Wed Mar 06 02:36:42 2002 GMT
+++ srmdoc/admin/compiling.xml Thu Mar 07 16:54:08 2002 GMT
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
<title>Compiling</title>
<para>
This section of the manual is designed to help you with building the
- Vulcan-Logic SRM. While using this document it is assumed that you have
- compiled PHP and Apache before, and that this is not your first installation
- of a software program on a Unix/Linux system.
+ Vulcan-Logic SRM daemon. This document assumes that you have compiled PHP
+ and Apache before, and that this is not your first installation of a
+ software program on a UNIX system.
</para>
<section id="admin.files">
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
url="http://www.vl-srm.net/download.php">download site</ulink> and the
latest <ulink url="http://www.php.net/anoncvs.php">CVS version of
PHP</ulink> (after March 1st, 2002). As of PHP version 4.2, SRM
- capabilities will be incorporated in the release versions of PHP.
+ capabilities will be incorporated in release versions of PHP.
</para>
<para>
After downloading the appropriate version of PHP, two more files are
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
From this point the directory listing of
- <literal>/home/user/install</literal> should look like this:
+ <literal>/home/user/install</literal> should contain:
</para>
<para>
<programlisting role="shell">
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
</programlisting>
</para>
<para>
- Now all files are unpacked and are ready to begin to configure and compile
+ Now all files are unpacked and are ready to begin configuring and compiling
SRM and PHP.
</para>
</section>
@@ -86,8 +86,8 @@
</programlisting>
</para>
<para>
- Please remember that <literal>--prefix</literal> additions here will also
- need to be manually entered into the srm.ini file once installation is
+ Please remember that any <literal>--prefix</literal> additions here will
+ also need to be manually entered into the srm.ini file once installation is
finished.
</para>
<para>
@@ -153,15 +153,15 @@
</para>
<para>
Now the PHP module for SRM is ready to be built. The following lines
- will compile the PHP module for SRM and place the module in the
+ will build the PHP module for SRM and place the module in the
<literal>/usr/local/srm/lib</literal> directory, or in the
<literal>/lib</literal> directory of the install prefix that was specified
at configure time.
</para>
<para>
<programlisting role="shell">
- make
- make install
+ % make
+ % make install
</programlisting>
</para>
<para>
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
for SRM should be in the proper place. It is now possible to start the
SRM Daemon by running the command <literal>/usr/local/srm/bin/srmd
</literal> (see the section on <link linkend="admin.commandline">command
- line</link> options.
+ line</link> options).
</para>
</section>
@@ -235,12 +235,12 @@
</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- The <link linkend="user.module.http">http module</link> can be used to
+ The <link linkend="user.module.http">http</link> module can be used to
view statistical data about the daemon, and in the future to tune
specific options. At the moment the <link
- linkend="user.module.http">http module</link> is experimental and is
- not available in release. If you want to test the http module you will
- need a CVS version of SRM. This makes it possible to authenticate a
+ linkend="user.module.http">http</link> module is experimental and is
+ not available in the release. A CVS version of SRM is required to
+ test the http module. This makes it possible to authenticate a
session with a password file.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -252,12 +252,12 @@
</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- The <link linkend="user.module.mhttp">mhttp module</link> implements
- a simple multi threaded http server which is able to access data
+ The <link linkend="user.module.mhttp">mhttp</link> module implements
+ a simple multi-threaded http server which is able to access data
stored as application level variables. At this moment, the <link
- linkend="user.module.mhttp">mhttp module</link> is experimental and
- is not available in release. If you want to test the http module you
- need a CVS version of SRM. This makes it possible to authenticate a
+ linkend="user.module.mhttp">mhttp</link> module is experimental and
+ is not available in the release. A CVS version of SRM is required to
+ test the http module. This makes it possible to authenticate a
session with a password file.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -270,10 +270,10 @@
<listitem>
<para>
This module enables the use of challenge-response based authentication,
- but requires the <link linkend="user.module.smxs">Secure Media XS
- module</link>. This module will be merged into the <link
- linkend="user.module.auth">auth module</link> and is currently not
- available from either releases or CVS.
+ but requires the <link linkend="user.module.smxs">Secure Media XS
+ </link> module. This module will be merged into the <link
+ linkend="user.module.auth">auth</link> module, and is currently not
+ available from either the releases or CVS.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
[FILE: /srmdoc/admin/installation.xml]
--- srmdoc/admin/installation.xml:1.6 Wed Mar 06 02:36:42 2002 GMT
+++ srmdoc/admin/installation.xml Thu Mar 07 16:54:08 2002 GMT
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
<section>
<title>SysV based UNIX</title>
<para>
- Why in the hell would you want to be running this style Unix anyways?
+ Why in the hell would you want to be running this style UNIX anyways?
</para>
</section>
Received on Thu Mar 7 18:59:27 2002
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